Hello Everyone. I hope everyone is doing well. I want your suggestions on my portfolio guys. I have made few tweaks in it today in sample section. A rundown about me: I am a content and copywriter with 3 years of expertise. Being a generalist writer, I pen down on several niches. My Portfolio :)

Hi @colossal-hospital-86563 I love that your portfolio starts off by telling me what I'll gain from working with you. You're also very detailed about what you do and that's great. A few suggestions • Your feedback section could use less speed. Each comment rushes off too quickly, making it hard to read. • Speak directly to your reader. By this I mean that you should use the word you in certain places. For instance, this sentence, “Once I have a firm grasp of the customer's state of mind and expectations, I can seamlessly include the brand's intended message.” Would be better off as “Once I have a firm grasp of your customer's state of mind and expectations, I can seamlessly include your brand's intended message.” • I sense that you chose multiple vibrant colours to reflect your personality. But I'll suggest sticking to 2 or 3 colors. The background colors felt inconsistent, and the changes visually straining. Maybe it's my eyesight but I do think you can do more with less colours. • Also, consider not italicizing your texts. You're using a font that's already style-heavy and it looks stuffed when italicized. • Consider restructuring your portfolio. For instance, the section that says “what is it like working with me?” Could highlight the feedback you included. Or you can use that as the title for your feedback section. • Finally, consider tightening your sentences. You can remove several words from the sentences under the section, “what is it like working with me?” I hope this helps.

Omg. Thank you sm @mysterious-gigabyte-24781. After reading your suggestions, I made the changes.

Nice overview! Easy to scan. One little thing — the blue testimonials box text overlaps with the text in the red box on my iPad. You might consider buying a domain name with your own name and mapping that to the site.

Of course @colossal-hospital-86563 happy to help! And the changes look great.

Thanks a lot @mysterious-gigabyte-24781. Would love to connect with you on LinkedIn.

Sure @colossal-hospital-86563. I'll say hi on LinkedIn.